Discussing with Susanne/Paulina

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Published on: 30/06/2011

Susanne’s and Paulina’s comments on the first part of the literature review:

  1. Put in a teaser like ‘neighbors go local on the world wide web’.
  2. Make sure that the word ‘memories’ is the right word in ‘online collections of local memories’.  (see online dictionary, maybe I should define it in a footnote). Or I should call it ‘stories’, ‘narratives’…
  3. Don’t use ‘community memory’ is a equivalent for ‘online collection of local memories’.
  4. Let the reader feel that th three claims with respect to the meaning for society are of great value to emphasize the urgency to develop a framework.

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